老師給我的評語是not bad 詳細日期已經忘了
可能有些用法有問題 不過筆力有限也改不了 有問題請不吝指教
There are many kinds of love. Broadly speaking, as long as you can find an object to appreciate, to devote, to express, and these things are all called “love.” For example, you can love your country, people, your family, a man or a woman, or even now what I want to discuss- homosexual love, they all can be defined “love.”
By the way, the reason I don’t discuss these great kinds of love and choose the homosexual love refused by common people is owing to the following two points: One is that they must bear a different vision from common people, and they love what they love bravely. The other is that although their actions astound the world, they have exquisite emotion that ordinary people lack, and homosexuals can be titled as “the outstanding people of their occupations.” These phenomena attract me.
No doubt, a homo has to bear a different vision from society. Owing to nowadays people are ignorant of them, many homosexuals broadcasting stations mushroom. Moreover, homos struggle for their rights from the dark corner. But many people stay at a respectful distance from them. Therefore, they have to choose between loving what they love or taking white flag to society helplessly. However, they always choose the former, even if they also choose the hell at the same time. It doesn’t waver homos’ love. That’s why I think they are respectful. Although they contribute to society less, they make the same efforts with people who devote themselves to their country. They make surrounding people admit them even though these common people still don’t necessarily agree what homos do.
In addition, most of them have exquisite minds and extraordinary abilities. Take my friend contacted from BBS (Broadcasting board system) for example. He is so sensitive to what I say, sometimes I say something with no malice, I still hurt his feelings. This makes me nervous every time when I talk to him. At the same time, he recommends me some movies about homos. One of them is about Tchaikovsky. This movie doesn’t focus on his music but introduces his private life especially the innermost suffering of being a gay. It proves that his exquisite music style rooted in his identity-homo- expressing his intense emotion from the world he had experienced.
Some people would rather choose the same sex people to be his/her lover than the opposite one. It shows that he/she really plucks up strong courage. Thus, when we meet homosexual people, in my opinion, we should do our best to be thoughtful for them and warm their hearts instead of persuading them not to be a gay or even discriminating against them. However, when it comes to the sexual behavior, I am so conservative that I can’t accept it. I think the constancy of their love is the reason why they attract me rather than the sex.